2009年5月12日 星期二

兒子作品─2

Lucky Ricky

Long long time ago, there were three mice living by the cheese shop, Nicky, Micky and Ricky.

One day, Nicky said, "You see, the cheese shop has a lot of cheese. We can go there and steal some cheese!" Micky said, "Your idea is good. Let's go, Ricky!" But Ricky said, "I don't want to go with you because I'm scared of the owners. If they see me, they will kill me...!" "Ha ha ha ha!' Nicky and Micky started to laugh hard. "You don't want to go with us? OK, Micky, let's go!"

"Hah! There isn't any owner, go!" Nicky said. "OK!" Micky said. "Wow! Here is a lot of cheese. Let's steal!" "Yeah! We really have a lot of cheese, Nicky!" "Let's go home!" Nicky said. As they were going home, a cat ran toward them. "Ah! It's a cat. Run!" They threw away the cheese and ran fast. They almost forgot the cheese. Just ran.

Next morning, Ricky went out to find Nicky and Micky, but he couldn't see any mouse. Suddenly, he saw a lot of cheese on the ground. So he's very happy and took the cheese home.


註:小阿姨覺得Ricky不勞而獲;爸爸覺得故事創意有餘、寓意不足。媽媽比較實際,覺得能用英文寫故事很不錯了,代表補習錢沒白花。

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